Young Yet Withering
January 20, 2012 § 21 Comments
so young yet withering
jaded, not inspiring
aching for a sudden chance
silent dreams at a distance.
scribblinghermit
thoughts~poetry~life~passion
January 20, 2012 § 21 Comments
so young yet withering
jaded, not inspiring
aching for a sudden chance
silent dreams at a distance.
scribblinghermit 
sad and succinct with an autumnal flavour;
autumnal flavour – i love that..thank you johnmalone I appreciate it 🙂
So short and yet so deep :). I really appreciate posts like this so I’ll be sure to follow you blog.Good luck with your writings and it is true that spring cleaning is a drag lol. Hope you check out my blog too ( if it’s not too much of a hassle)
p.s. I’m still pretty new at this so I still don’t have a lot of posts but I would really appreciate it if you read them. God bless :).
thank you for taking time to visit my blog casareo1c9 🙂 thank you for your kind words and yes I will surely visit your blog and make time. Have fun with writing 🙂
when you see your chance, take it.. until then you’ve got to learn to spot identify the signs that the leaves are changing colour in your life! thanx for following my blog too by the way 🙂
thank you tigercity! its encouraging, really.. you are welcome 🙂
I love how you always seem to get right to the point in such a beautiful way…
lamehousewife, thank you for stoppin by and reading 🙂 appreciate it. it humbles me 🙂
Wonderful little nugget of hope! To thank you for your great blog, I’ve nominated you for the Liebster Award (details here: http://planaquarium.wordpress.com/awards/) Congrats!
planaquarium thank you so much! I appreciate it dearly 🙂
strong expression in so few words…. thank you for visiting mine earlier too 🙂
you are very welcome! thank you for your very kind words I appreciate it so much 🙂
Really like how your writing makes me think and come back to it for a second read. Being a photographer your words bring up visuals also… like this.
Mike thank you that really means a lot 🙂 I enjoy viewing your beautiful photos coz i also enjoy photography 🙂
Thank you , ScribblingHermit
This poem is short, yet powerful!
Thank u!
Emily Dickinson also wrote short and powerful, to the point verse. Bet she would have liked this one too. Nicely done.
wow thank you for all your kind words 🙂 i appreciate it 🙂
wonderful written peom!
Ciao, Francina
Words spoken so softly they have the force of a hurricane…